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It really makes me happy everytime i see someone is interested in my pics. wether it is a comment a fav or watch.
love you all~


Oh my god i finally finished this !! *dies*
Im sorry for being such an addict to blue/purple colors!!
I dont remember now what i wanted to say about it ahah..
And finally i succes at drawing Carvi ! (yeah more or less xD )

also the pose is from some shoujo manga, i thought it was so cute that i had to draw it with Cannelle and Carvi

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The image is simply beautiful. What pulled me in first was the bridge. The contrast, perspective and hue of it just pulls the viewer in and draws you to the bottom where the figures are. Great details put into it as well. The Flowers on the side then draw you again to the figures, another nice touch. I want to say they might've been better if they were more pale or toned out, but I think perhaps if they were smaller. (I can't be sure if they make it a tad TOO busy despite bringing attention down.)

The two figures at the bottom have such pretty highlighting and lighting in general. There's a few anatomy flaws around the hands, but those can be style based. The girls head seems slightly too big. I think to fix that, you can make her chest and torso area a bit thicker (Not now of course, but in the future).

I'm also curious as to what she is looking at. =)
Again, Wonderful work.
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Très classe la colo !
:iconchinomiko:
merci *x*

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wow, i totally love this! x3 amazing colors and the bg is...wow im speechless

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Ehm, sorry I am in no position to write a critique but if it helps I d like to say 2 things: first that it s really nice, especially the flowers on the side. Only thing I m not sure of but it s not too big too see, so I might be wrong but maybe the girl's nose seems a bit "square" on one side because of the shade. But otherwise it s lovely! :)
Do these 2 have a story? :D
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ow la compo déchire sa race : B
et très jolie colo : D
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wow alors la chapeaux c'est une très belle illus o/

Les fleurs sont super bien faites ! les persos de même que la compos est très agréable.

La colo elle est super et donne une bonne ambiance.

comment tu déchire. C'est super ^^
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thanks a lot *//*
ive worked several hours on this, and i lost the first file with completed bg and flowers because my dog turned my comp off just when i was saving (yes my dog turns my comp off xDD since that incident he cant anymore)
it costed me some efforts to do it all again, was kind of depressed o_o;;

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merci choco !! =D

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merci beaucoup x33
jai eu le courage de tt refaire, un peu l impression d avoir foiré la colo des persos au debut quand meme..mais finallement ca va je pense =3

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thank you ^__^
you re rigght about her nose shadow xD
iwas too lazy to change it *curse me !!*

and yes they have a story ^^
in fact, its not a story i ll be doing a comic of.. but its more for myself to develop an universe, characters and do some nice pic which you can feel there is a story behind it, and not just a random character to pose.
im starting to like them =3

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